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Thursday, 14 June 2018

Re-reading,revising,editing and re-crafting our work.





Once upon a time there lived  kind,lovely,strong animals.
There was one Bee,one Rabbit,one
Donkey,one Bull, and one Chicken.
Donkey was so bored of waiting for the food.
One day the Donkey decided to go for a walk.
He didn’t want to go alone so he asked all of them if they wanted to come
.They all replied yes.The donkey was so happy.









Once upon a time there lived a group of  kind,lovely,strong animals.
There
was one Bee,one Rabbit,one
Donkey,one Bull, and one Chicken.
Donkey was so bored of waiting for the food.
In the middle of the day Donkey decided to go for a walk,
but he didn’t want to go alone
so he asked all of his friends if they wanted to come.
They all replied “yes”.
The Donkey was so happy.