Informative Writing.

Explanation template

C	Classification - Introduce your topic. Tell what the object or animal is, who the person is or where the place is.
D	Description - Use paragraphs with topic sentences, to organise bundles of information about your topic
C	Conclusion - Make a personal comment about the subject or report

Title Be clever! Hook your reader	The fantasy of Brazil
Classification Introduce your topic. Tell who, where or what it is	Today I will be explaining where Brazil is located in South America, and I will be telling you what they do in Brazil and what there original tradition is.
Describe 1st element Subheading 1	The Jesus Sculpture was made in Rio de Janeiro.  The Jesus sculpture was made in 1922 to 1931. It took a long time to build the Statue.  It only took 4 people. Paul Landowski, Heitor Da Silva Costa,  Albert Caquot, and Gheorghe Leonida.
Describe 2nd element Subheading 2	One of the Famous landmarks in Brazil is the Iguazu Falls.Visitors to the falls have their choice of either walking on the specially constructed walkways for an up close look of the falls, or taking a helicopter trip over the falls for a bird’s eye view.
Describe 3rd element Subheading 3	Did you know in Brazil does a lot of Carnivals?.  Mostly if you walk around in a bikini, it's usually normal for the people who live there.  Since it’s so hot in Brazil.
Describe 4th element Subheading 4	The name Brazil comes from a tree named brazil-wood.  The tree is located in Portuguese and the real name is Pau-Brazil.
Conclusion -Summarise OR -Question your topic/findings OR -Write a personal statement/reflect	Brazil is a very Beautiful country.  Their are a lot of famous landmarks, places, and people.  If you would want to go on a holiday, my advice for you is to go to Brazil.:)

Anzac day extra post

This is my Anzac day extra post.  I only did a few sentences since this is a extra post.

Harry's war

Task Description: Last week I read a story about Harry's war.  It was about how Harry and his military friends got shipped to England to have a war against them.  The war was over but they had now way of getting home.  They were so bored they carved a chalk kiwi on the hill.

Choose it Narrative: Draft

This is my choose it narrative. We had to choose 1 photo out of 4. I choose this one, and my story is about this photo. Enjoy :)

Rosie, and her 3 friends were hanging out on a Saturday evening.  Anna decides to go for a walk around the park.

 “Shall we go to the park?” asked Anna

 “Yeah we should” says Lilly.

“ Me too”, screams Jazzelle,

“Me 3!!” says Rosie.

 The 4 girls leave  Rosie’s house and was off to the park.

 “Do you know what happened down at Rainbows End?” asked Jazzelle.

 “Nope all I know is that they have a new ride called the Stratosfear, they say it’s very scary and people even FAINTED on that ride!” exclaimed Rosie

“Yeah about that someone died on that ride, even worse”, says Jazzelle.

“Let’s get going to the park ” Says Lilly with a low, soft  voice.

Finally, the 4 girls reach the park, there is a big dodgeball wall and behind there is a fence.  You are allowed to go there, it’s not a “restricted area”.  The 4 girls were talking and swinging on the swing.  Suddenly, Rosie had a real good feeling.

“Do you guys want to go behind the fence?” asked Rosie.

 “Why not” said Lilly.

 “ were off girls” Shouts Anna with a cracking voice.

“ What’s behind that fence anyways” anxiously  asked Anna.

“Maybe an abandoned car or something I don’t know” replies Rosie.

 The girls finally reach behind the fence.  It was strange.  It was like a big field with lots of trees.  But one tree looked suspicious.

“Uhh, Let’s go check out that tree” boringly says Lilly.

As the girls approach the tree, they could see like a door handle in the front of the trunk.  Anna goes up to the tree, and knocks on it.  It was a hollow tree, it echoed, the echo  bounced it’s way to the top

Rosie goes closer, and puts her hand on the door handle, she twists  and opens the door. Inside was very big, it had stairs going to the top of the tree. The girls walked up the stairs, the stairs squealed like a mouse. At the top was STUNNING.

Rosie and her friends were speechless.  What they find at the top was a big empty room.  It was old, and dusty.

“I have an idea what if we turn this tree into our secret hideout” excitedly says Rosie.

  “Of course finally we have our own privacy for once” sarcastically says Lilly.

The next day, Rosie seems to bringing a big golf bag.  “Why did you bring a golf bag?” asked Anna.

“We’re going back to the tree remember”  said Rosie.

  “ but why do you need a golf bag?, it’s not useful” replies Anna .

 “I  know but what’s in the bag is useful” says Rosie.

The girls head to the their “secret hideout”.  When they got there Rosie opened the golf back, she brought 3 big bottles of water, a electric vacuum   (it doesn't need to be plugged in) and a Mop.


Rosie and Anna did a good job of cleaning the tree.  It was spotless.  Lilly and Jazzelle were very busy and couldn't .


Rosie and the girls were back to school.  They were sad the holidays were over :(.  Jazzelle made new friends with Ally and Paige,  that was a big disaster.

To Be Continued