Persuasive writing.

What the colors mean: Purple for Statement, Green for Opinion, Blue for facts, and Yellow for reason.

Rosie’s Persuasive Writing 

Introduction:

Should school always be as long, as it should be?

In my opinion, school should start at 8:50 AM and should finish at 3:10 PM because the students that live far have more time to get to school.

P1 Good :

Finishing Early    

Finishing early won’t be better for us students.

  We need the time to learn.  

If we don’t have that much learning time, we won’t learn that much. 

 Finishing early is good too.  

You can spend time with your family when you finish early.

P2 Better :

Learning

Learning can give us more knowledge, Learning is more important for us kids as we need it, as we grow up, and as our future would really depend on it.

  But also, another reason is when kids want a job that include education, they have no choice but to study.

P3 Best :

Future

We all depend on our future as we need educational learning that can help us to succeed, whether or not, our future will go down the hill.

Conclusion:

It came to a conclusion, in my opinion that school is very important for our upcoming future.