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Another way to be a good daughter is to talk nicely to your parents. By telling them how much you appreciate them, and answering back in a positive manner you are showing your parents how much they mean to you.  When your parents ask you to do something it is important that you listen and respond in a timely and respectful manner. For example, when mum asks you to put away the laundry, you should immediately respond by saying, “yes mum” as you stand up and put the laundry away without a scowl on your face.

Another way to show that you are a good daughter is by your actions.  By being helpful around the house you are showing your parents that you respect them. For example, when you keep your bed made and your room clean you are showing that you respect your living space. This also comes into play when you complete your chores without being asked. So, when you wake up in the morning or get home from school, immediately vacuum the house, put away the dishes and take out the rubbish. 

It is very important to always show kindness towards your parents. Although this can be difficult at times, it is important to show kindness to your parents because it shows that you respect them. For example, when you really want to go somewhere with your friends and your parents tell you that you have to stay home and look after your little siblings, it is important to remember that your parents have your best interests in mind.

Anyone has the ability to be a good daughter. By showing kindness, listening to your parents, and being helpful you are showing your parents that you love and respect them. What else can you do in your life to be a good daughter?

TASK DESCRIPTION: Instructions: Take a close look at the written portions of the explanation written by a former PES student below. 

1. copy and paste each section in the correct box on the explanation template above. 
2. Using the highlighter tool (above next to the text colour icon), highlight all of the connectives YELLOW .
3. You should have one empty box in the template. Taking time to decide what that empty box should be about, write the missing part of the explanation. 
4. In each Information Paragraph:
1. Highlight each statement BLUE
2. Highlight each explanation GREEN
3. Highlight each example PINK

(This is not my writing). I had to highlight all the sentences that had the SEE paragraphs in them. Statement, Explanation, and Example. I also had to highlight all the connectives. However, when, because, and If.