Dancing with the stars. (2019 writing)

Bella is an orphan.   She has been alone her whole life. 
She is now 13 years old.  Her dream is to become a Ballet dancer. 




  One day, Bella planned to escape the orphanage. 
 She didn’t like how the adults treated her.   They treated her like garbage.   
When it was Night time, Bella snuck out.   She almost forgot the
Mirror her mother gave her.   
Bella was very young at the time.  Her mother made a frame for the mirror,
\and put stickers
around the frame  saying “I love you bella - Mom”.   Bella opened the
door and crept out
into the hall.
   Midnight struck.  Bella crept past Mrs Jonathan’s door
.  She was just about to past Mr Samuel’s room……….. BOOM! Mr
Samuel’s door flies open. 
Mr Samuel yelled at Bella.  “GET BACK TO YOU BED!!, YOU THINK
WE DON’T HAVE
CAMERAS!!”. 
Bella stormed back to her bed and went to sleep.  



The next morning, Bella ran to the bathroom, with all her stuff,
and she leaped
out of the window.  It wasn’t that high.   Even though she
was on the second floor,
she still made it.  She ran to the front where the gate is. 
 She quickly jumped over
the gate,
and she ran as fast as she could.   At the gate was Mr Sameul,
standing there,
screaming, “BELLA!!!!”.



Bella got to the city, she felt awful.   She remembered her
best friend Jonathan. 
She didn’t want to go back but she had to.  Bella ran back to
the Orphanage. 
 Mr Samuel was on the foot step.  Bella walked slowly to Mr
Samuel. 
She got punished. She had to clean the dishes, mob the floor,
make everyone’s bed,
and she had to clean the bathroom.  Jonathan heard the news. 
“You tried to sneak out without me?”  Bella said “
Why do you think I came back”.




                TO BE CONTINUED



      

Persuasive writing.

What the colors mean: Purple for Statement, Green for Opinion, Blue for facts, and Yellow for reason.

Rosie’s Persuasive Writing 

Introduction:

Should school always be as long, as it should be?

In my opinion, school should start at 8:50 AM and should finish at 3:10 PM because the students that live far have more time to get to school.

P1 Good :

Finishing Early    

Finishing early won’t be better for us students.

  We need the time to learn.  

If we don’t have that much learning time, we won’t learn that much. 

 Finishing early is good too.  

You can spend time with your family when you finish early.

P2 Better :

Learning

Learning can give us more knowledge, Learning is more important for us kids as we need it, as we grow up, and as our future would really depend on it.

  But also, another reason is when kids want a job that include education, they have no choice but to study.

P3 Best :

Future

We all depend on our future as we need educational learning that can help us to succeed, whether or not, our future will go down the hill.

Conclusion:

It came to a conclusion, in my opinion that school is very important for our upcoming future. 

Advertisement, persuasive or not???

Task description: Today we had to watch advertisements, and we had to write what that advertisement was promoting, and if it was suitable for adults, or kids. We also had to write what we liked about the advertisement.

Genome sequence summary

Genome sequence summary

When we get hurt, our bodies know how to mend the part body that is hurt, it’s in our DNA, that's how our bodies know what to do when we get hurt.When our bodies are fully asleep, our bodies do all sorts of things like healing themselves without us knowing but it doesn’t include magic and that's for sure . 


DNA is part of us and it controls us as an Instruction Manual in our bodies the instructions that includes 6 billion Chemical letters which are A , G , T and C.Inside our cells is a chemical called DNA,(fun fact: our whole body is made of chemicals).  DNA has Letters, which is a code for our body Gene.



99% of our Sequences are mainly the same but only 1% is different which means if you have brown eyes and you want your baby to have blue eyes you are likely to only have a chance of 1% out of 100% .



Everyone in the world has glitches in our bodies and if you have a change in your body that means it will likely be weaker than the other arm unless you want to find the glitch and sort it out your gonna have to look inside your Genome Sequence .




Task description:  Today I learnt that we got a chemical called DNA.  I knew what DNA was but I didn't know that DNA was a chemical.  I also learnt that we have a code that makes all of us unique, the code is A, G, T, and C.  If one of the letters change, it can make a difference to your DNA.

Te Tiriti O Waitangi

Explanation template

Come home safe

Recount/explain in sequence(in order) Finanga’s tragic story.

In 2005, morning of May 10, Finanga was working with his coworker Esera.  They were loading up concrete slabs. As soon as they finished, they started to load up 20 panels of concrete.  But the last panel, the 20th panel, snapped, and landed on Finanga.  He was calling out for Esera, but there was not response.

When the ambulance arrived Finanga’s first question was “where’s my mate”, they said he’s alright and that he was worse.  By the time he was in hospital, Finanga’s cousin came.  He was the first person to come.  When Finanga’s cousin came, he told Finanga that Esera passed away.  It was a sad, sad feeling. Esera Vivesio 1967-2005.  He sadly passed away when he was 28.



           Story 2
In 2002 Isaac had savielly crushed his right hand.  His brother(Joseph parker's dad) had witnessed the incident.  There were rolling mills, where you guide the steel bar in.  Isaac had thought he put on the wrong set of gloves.  He rolled in the steel bars, while he was rolling in the steel bar, Isaac’s glove got caught in the Rolling mills.  His brother ran to the scene, and on the other side was his brother’s right arm, crushed and covered with blood.  Now Isaac has a prosthetic arm, and it’s a little harder to work with it.  Now he is doing a 2 hands man job, 2 MAN HAND JOB, with one prosthetic arm.  He is a good working hard man.


Why is this film called “ come home safely “.
It’s called that for a reason, and the reason is for people who working for jobs like that, make sure to wear the right gear, make sure to not take dangerous risks, and look after yourself while you are at work.  Also, it means to come home without any injuries.