This is my choose it narrative. We had to choose 1 photo out of 4. I choose this one, and my story is about this photo. Enjoy :)
Rosie, and her 3 friends were hanging out on a Saturday evening. Anna decides to go for a walk around the park.
“Shall we go to the park?” asked Anna
“Yeah we should” says Lilly.
“ Me too”, screams Jazzelle,
“Me 3!!” says Rosie.
The 4 girls leave Rosie’s house and was off to the park.
“Do you know what happened down at Rainbows End?” asked Jazzelle.
“Nope all I know is that they have a new ride called the Stratosfear, they say it’s very scary and people even FAINTED on that ride!” exclaimed Rosie
“Yeah about that someone died on that ride, even worse”, says Jazzelle.
“Let’s get going to the park ” Says Lilly with a low, soft voice.
Finally, the 4 girls reach the park, there is a big dodgeball wall and behind there is a fence. You are allowed to go there, it’s not a “restricted area”. The 4 girls were talking and swinging on the swing. Suddenly, Rosie had a real good feeling.
“Do you guys want to go behind the fence?” asked Rosie.
“Why not” said Lilly.
“ were off girls” Shouts Anna with a cracking voice.
“ What’s behind that fence anyways” anxiously asked Anna.
“Maybe an abandoned car or something I don’t know” replies Rosie.
The girls finally reach behind the fence. It was strange. It was like a big field with lots of trees. But one tree looked suspicious.
“Uhh, Let’s go check out that tree” boringly says Lilly.
As the girls approach the tree, they could see like a door handle in the front of the trunk. Anna goes up to the tree, and knocks on it. It was a hollow tree, it echoed, the echo bounced it’s way to the top
Rosie goes closer, and puts her hand on the door handle, she twists and opens the door. Inside was very big, it had stairs going to the top of the tree. The girls walked up the stairs, the stairs squealed like a mouse. At the top was STUNNING.
Rosie and her friends were speechless. What they find at the top was a big empty room. It was old, and dusty.
“I have an idea what if we turn this tree into our secret hideout” excitedly says Rosie.
“Of course finally we have our own privacy for once” sarcastically says Lilly.
The next day, Rosie seems to bringing a big golf bag. “Why did you bring a golf bag?” asked Anna.
“We’re going back to the tree remember” said Rosie.
“ but why do you need a golf bag?, it’s not useful” replies Anna .
“I know but what’s in the bag is useful” says Rosie.
The girls head to the their “secret hideout”. When they got there Rosie opened the golf back, she brought 3 big bottles of water, a electric vacuum (it doesn't need to be plugged in) and a Mop.
Rosie and Anna did a good job of cleaning the tree. It was spotless. Lilly and Jazzelle were very busy and couldn't .
Rosie and the girls were back to school. They were sad the holidays were over :(. Jazzelle made new friends with Ally and Paige, that was a big disaster.
To Be Continued
“Shall we go to the park?” asked Anna
“Yeah we should” says Lilly.
“ Me too”, screams Jazzelle,
“Me 3!!” says Rosie.
The 4 girls leave Rosie’s house and was off to the park.
“Do you know what happened down at Rainbows End?” asked Jazzelle.
“Nope all I know is that they have a new ride called the Stratosfear, they say it’s very scary and people even FAINTED on that ride!” exclaimed Rosie
“Yeah about that someone died on that ride, even worse”, says Jazzelle.
“Let’s get going to the park ” Says Lilly with a low, soft voice.
Finally, the 4 girls reach the park, there is a big dodgeball wall and behind there is a fence. You are allowed to go there, it’s not a “restricted area”. The 4 girls were talking and swinging on the swing. Suddenly, Rosie had a real good feeling.
“Do you guys want to go behind the fence?” asked Rosie.
“Why not” said Lilly.
“ were off girls” Shouts Anna with a cracking voice.
“ What’s behind that fence anyways” anxiously asked Anna.
“Maybe an abandoned car or something I don’t know” replies Rosie.
The girls finally reach behind the fence. It was strange. It was like a big field with lots of trees. But one tree looked suspicious.
“Uhh, Let’s go check out that tree” boringly says Lilly.
As the girls approach the tree, they could see like a door handle in the front of the trunk. Anna goes up to the tree, and knocks on it. It was a hollow tree, it echoed, the echo bounced it’s way to the top
Rosie goes closer, and puts her hand on the door handle, she twists and opens the door. Inside was very big, it had stairs going to the top of the tree. The girls walked up the stairs, the stairs squealed like a mouse. At the top was STUNNING.
Rosie and her friends were speechless. What they find at the top was a big empty room. It was old, and dusty.
“I have an idea what if we turn this tree into our secret hideout” excitedly says Rosie.
“Of course finally we have our own privacy for once” sarcastically says Lilly.
The next day, Rosie seems to bringing a big golf bag. “Why did you bring a golf bag?” asked Anna.
“We’re going back to the tree remember” said Rosie.
“ but why do you need a golf bag?, it’s not useful” replies Anna .
“I know but what’s in the bag is useful” says Rosie.
The girls head to the their “secret hideout”. When they got there Rosie opened the golf back, she brought 3 big bottles of water, a electric vacuum (it doesn't need to be plugged in) and a Mop.
Rosie and Anna did a good job of cleaning the tree. It was spotless. Lilly and Jazzelle were very busy and couldn't .
Rosie and the girls were back to school. They were sad the holidays were over :(. Jazzelle made new friends with Ally and Paige, that was a big disaster.
To Be Continued
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